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sorry to say, your grammar is terrible. however, you can fix it. there are online courses that you can take to fix it. you were saying that you write poetry. if someone sees any mistakes in it, they shouldn't insult you. on the other hand, they should encourage you to write more, so that your english will improve. it's true that alot of people have grammar and pronouciation mistakes, but its not right to be insulting and discouraging to them, they should be helped out.